It gets to the meat of everything quickly and covers everything efficiently, opens up some intrigue about the universe at large. The way the Human's character is revealed is done well, only feedback is it would've been interesting to see the other two characters personalities revealed in the moment rather than explained. That being said Qlicks had an interesting background that would be nice to know more about and Xob seemed like a good anchor / fulcrum to keep the group together, a good foundation for the dynamics of the group.
FluxyShark
An interesting piece ^w^.
It gets to the meat of everything quickly and covers everything efficiently, opens up some intrigue about the universe at large. The way the Human's character is revealed is done well, only feedback is it would've been interesting to see the other two characters personalities revealed in the moment rather than explained. That being said Qlicks had an interesting background that would be nice to know more about and Xob seemed like a good anchor / fulcrum to keep the group together, a good foundation for the dynamics of the group.
Overall, a good short piece~.